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 Solitude Of Despair
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Warm air fills the room
But my body feels cold and empty inside
Cold without your warming love
Cold without hope
Cold without your contiguous
Empty without our dreams
The cold facts that you left me
Has put my mind into a philosophical demeanor
That has turned into despair
I seek the comfort of solitude
The sun shines, I don't see it
Its warm rays, I don't feel it
I walk in the woods blind, seeking solitude
Hearing
Noticing
Touching nothing in my path
I walk without your love
I walk without the comfort you gave me
I walk a lonesome stroll of despair
While my mind seeks solitude
A weeping willow tree blocks my path
It seems to reflect the person I have become
Weak bodied and fragile looking
As it leans with every slight breeze
Its limbs hang as if the weight of the world is on them
I sit down next to it as a reflection of comfort
A bird lands on a tree nearby
But I can't identify it because my vision is blurred
I close my eyes so they can rid themselves of their dampness
Now in solitude, I weep not alone

Posted by 1manview at 4:58 PM - 19 Comments   Add a Comment  
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LOVE THE POEM, MADE ME DO A RELAPSE TO THE PAST. MY BOYFRIEND CAME IN AND HE SAW ME CRYING OFF UR POEM.  
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by datgirlbg (PM , CC ) on Friday April 11, 2008 @ 9:02 PM




Very expressive writing. Nicely done.  
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Friday April 11, 2008 @ 11:11 PM




I think we all walk that path to one degree or another...very good poem..  
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by Cracker (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 12, 2008 @ 12:20 AM




Great poem.  
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by Miss Lou (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 12, 2008 @ 2:59 AM




If love is like a rollacoster ride and you know it is - then why pursue it? I don't understand. You are sad because its gone but you can just pay for another ticket and ride again can't you?

These poems are really good. Your words are good. I hope you find your lady. Please take care of you...
 
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by Rosie (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 12, 2008 @ 8:51 AM




Your poetry is beautiful and thought provoking. Is that your artowrk too? It is really good. I love the simplicity of it yet there is so much detail too. It evokes a visual story.

Awesome post 1!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 12, 2008 @ 11:04 PM




Your poem speaks to a long ago time in my life and touches a nerve I had thought long healed.

It was beautifully done.
 
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by Anexplorer (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 12, 2008 @ 11:11 PM




Very dark and dreary....expressive, and therefore very good poetry.

I felt it.


Keep writing, it's good.
 
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by Randy (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 1:16 AM




Thank you. It was also from my past. I wrote it to let someone know I really knew how they felt after they said, "you wouldn't understand."  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 1:16 PM




Thank you for stopping in and for the comment.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 1:18 PM




Thank you Cracker, and thanz for popping in  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 4:36 PM




Thank you Miss Lou for the comment.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 4:40 PM




For you Rosie
thank you
 
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 5:09 PM




Oh thankyou. It's lovely...  
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by Rosie (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 7:00 PM




Thankyou very much PolarB for the compliment. The art work is not mine, the name of the artist is on the right lower corner. I got the idea from one of the poem sites that is helping me with my poetry writing. Some people were using pictures and artwork with their poems and I really liked the idea. Like you said, it evokes a visual story. Sometimes I spend almost three times the time I used writing the poem, searching for art. This is one of them, and this is one piece of art I wished I owned. One day....  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Monday April 14, 2008 @ 1:43 AM




Thank you Anexplorer... Like Cracker said, " we all walk that path to one degree or another." I had put this behind me myself, but somebody very dear to me, needed to hear it.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Monday April 14, 2008 @ 1:51 AM




Thank you Randy, and please fill free to return.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Monday April 14, 2008 @ 8:46 AM




I read back through some of your poems. They are very expressive and full of feeling.  
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by Candy (PM , CC ) on Monday April 14, 2008 @ 9:23 PM




Thank you very much Candy  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 15, 2008 @ 2:26 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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