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In my dream I was alone
Slowly drifting out to sea without a paddle nor sail
The moon had a reddish glow to it
The wind was so still it was eerie
I sat all alone with nothing but my thoughts
No one to talk to me
No one that could hear me
No one to hold and comfort me
No one to give comfort too
No one.......
In my dream I was alone
Then I woke up and saw you next to me
In my heart I am still alone
Posted by 1manview at 2:09 PM - 10 Comments   Add a Comment  
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thats the loneliest lonely...  
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by Cracker (PM , CC ) on Thursday June 19, 2008 @ 5:56 AM




You are so correct. Living together doesn't guaranty your heart would be lonely. Thanks for stopping in Cracker  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Thursday June 19, 2008 @ 9:12 PM




Hello 1manview--as I was voyeuring some of the blogs I came across yours. Your poetry words made me stop-you have some very movable expressions in your contents. I,also like oddquain poetry and thought I would leave you with an old one I liked..



For the Lover of Poetry--written by SmOOth 1ne in 2006..

drink deep of the fruit of my fingertips
run your tongue across your lips so as to
let not a single drop escape your consumption
take into yourself all of me
imbibe the thoughts of my heart
swallow the marrow of my bones
take the fullness of my expression
and explain to me more than I had hoped to convey
give back to me of myself, only more, only better…
better because it has entered into you
and been massaged by your heart
been filtered through the deepest bowels of you
to take on your very essence
now bearing your sweat, your very own blood
your very own soul
return it to me, so I can revel in…
what it has meant to you
what it has given to you
what it has taken from you
what it has done to you
let me know
let me see, and feel, and taste
the effect of my fruit on your soul
explain to me more than I had hoped to convey
take from me
explain to me
give to me
return
to
me
d
e
a
r


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and I will give you yet more again.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Gypsy Rani
 
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by Gypsy Rani (PM , CC ) on Friday June 20, 2008 @ 6:23 PM




Thank you Gypsy Rani for the comments and the lovely poem. I've only been writing poems for a short while. I like seeing and trying different styles. Unfortunate this time of year leaves me with such little time to write. Please fell free to leave more poetry anytime.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Friday June 20, 2008 @ 7:57 PM




I painted this same ship in water color, but it was in the fog. How interesting that I would see the same ship again. The ship never changes no matter what kind of waters it is in. Good job. Teri  
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by teri (PM , CC ) on Friday June 27, 2008 @ 2:51 PM




Thank You for the comment and for stopping in. Hope to see you again... 1manview ...  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Friday June 27, 2008 @ 10:10 PM




I love this one 1Man, Really neat pulling out the ending like that.

PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Sunday June 29, 2008 @ 12:16 AM




Thank you PolarB, nice to see you around theses parts again ....  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday June 29, 2008 @ 8:05 PM




Really nice 1manview! Loved it!
Love
Have a happy Hump day!
Dixie
 
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by dixie (PM , CC ) on Wednesday July 2, 2008 @ 8:36 AM




Thank you Dixie, and a happy 4th of July to you.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Wednesday July 2, 2008 @ 6:24 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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